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Is the sky really blue?
Are you Truley True?
How many hearts died
Each time that you lied?
I sit with you now
Just wondering how
That all of this time,
I act perfectly Fine.

Now here you Cry
Under a gray sky
Beg my forgiveness
For all of your Lies.
I smile so wide
And build my own lie
"I'll never forgive you,
I wont even try."


Is the sky really blue?
Are you Truley True?
How many false tries
to cover your lies?
I sit with you now
Just wondering how
That all of this time,
I act perfectly Fine.

Now here you Cry
Under a gray sky
Beg my forgiveness
For all of your Lies.
I smile so wide
And build my own lie
"I'll never forgive you,
I wont even try."
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I wrote this for The guy I love.
But he doesent love me, SO yeah.

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Is there an actual song that you have that goes along with the words? It'd be really nice as a song, I think.

I appreciate that you haven't sacrificed the meaning of the song, just for the purpose of rhyming. It has a nice flow to it. ^^ Hope you're doing okay, though. :hug:

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